Notes: Six-eyes is angry and frustrated at this red-optic’d bot in front of him. Jet shows up to see the scuffle and the girl crawls away. Panel 1 is also probably one of the more favorite sketches of Lyron I’ve done, he’s all real serious business there.
Man, toning is time consuming…
Notes: bamph. * Hyunewurl scrables to the bushes to escape. Was kinda lazy with this page but it still gets the message across.
Notes: Lyron now has an Ugly stick. I also played around with some new fonts from Blambot.com for sound effects to see if they would be more or less destracting then by writing them by hand.
Also, Lyron lost his Short swords back in Sekond world, so he only has his arm guns and a few other things at his disposal. So He breaks a tree in half to use as a good beatn stick.
Notes: I tried to keep this page from being too graphic… but at the same time as realistic as possible. Hopefully it should be self-explanatory. “Rutting” if you will…
Hyunewurl is being ‘seeded’ with nanomachines. Because they are both an APHEL match, this won’t make her pregnant or kill her. It will change her into a Guardia.
Notes: Enter the “ambivelent Guardia” The girl with the iron horn crown.
If Tamarin (the girl from the begining of the chapter) was the happy Guardia, and Hyunewurl is the “unhappy soon-to-be guardia” that just leaves this one prespective to be introduced. This and last page were off script, and not something Edited by Jason but I felt this page needed to be in here before showing what happens beyond that.
Guardias look normally like a larger version of who they used to be as a human. Its hard for non humans to pick out who a guardia is and who isnt, unless they transform.
Notes: This girl cant escape.
notes: On this page, Lyron passes by a tank full of bubbling yellow liquid. This liquid is full of nanomachines and is meant for those who have sustained more damage then their own nanotek reserves can handle. A female Guardia is chillin’ in that tank and sees Lyron looking at her. This girl looks perfectly fine except for the bottoms of her hands and feet are mechanized.
Lyron doesnt really understand a lot of what he sees, and when a bot comes up behind him suddenly to put some cords into his body, he asks for an “MU” port. (not even I know what an MU port is 
. Soon after, the bot, Jet and Rendivi shuffle off to the corner of the room leaving lyron unattended..
extra note: Lyron gets the ‘robot eyes’ whenever someone makes him super uncomfortable.
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Notes: Based on the high percentage of people who voted that they did not like the WIP, I have decided that this will be the last time I post ‘work-in-progress’ pages. As the Webmaster has suggested, WIP pages may be a huge turn-off when it comes to first impressions of this comic. It would probably better to just leave the current pages up and update when I have a complete page as I used to do. I hope for your patience however, as I am not operating with a page buffer.
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