notes: I edited A sentace from makenai’s speech, thought it sounded redundant.
Makenai Makes a tiny reference to Northsky here. In the Edenwiki (I think) it explains that there was a flying island the mashina built before Holy built Edenworld. Makenai was forced to work there in the early wars, The place was a hoosegow for the minority mecha, Now its just a mobile weapons cache some gears run.
Notes: Gonna be a couple of pages with allot of text to get out of the way. As for this page, the 2nd half is a flashback of what was going on while Holy was away from his office. Holy was meeting up with Sargasso (a later side character) and trying to calm the yarl/mayor of Dalmuhd down over Lyron and Jet fighting in their neighborhood unauthorised.
In the last panel theres a guy standing behind the Yarl, He’s the dweller of the home that Lyron shoved Jet through back in book 6.
For scale’s sake, the Mayor and the people of Dalmuhd aveh are mostly quite small (human sized). But In Paragon city where Holy Gear is with the official, the people there all vary from human sized to mech sized and the architecture reflects this. A lot of creatures can be hurt in Dalmuhd because of their size compared to the Mashina so Basicly noboudy should be fighting within the green zone.
notes: Jet gives Lyron the same one-handed grab that he used on Rendivi earlyer. Frustrated, Six tosses the tree down on the ground in a huff and Holy gear arrives on scene.
Notes: Six-eyes is angry and frustrated at this red-optic’d bot in front of him. Jet shows up to see the scuffle and the girl crawls away. Panel 1 is also probably one of the more favorite sketches of Lyron I’ve done, he’s all real serious business there.
Man, toning is time consuming…
Notes: bamph. * Hyunewurl scrables to the bushes to escape. Was kinda lazy with this page but it still gets the message across.
Notes: Lyron now has an Ugly stick. I also played around with some new fonts from Blambot.com for sound effects to see if they would be more or less destracting then by writing them by hand.
Also, Lyron lost his Short swords back in Sekond world, so he only has his arm guns and a few other things at his disposal. So He breaks a tree in half to use as a good beatn stick.
Notes: I tried to keep this page from being too graphic… but at the same time as realistic as possible. Hopefully it should be self-explanatory. “Rutting” if you will…
Hyunewurl is being ‘seeded’ with nanomachines. Because they are both an APHEL match, this won’t make her pregnant or kill her. It will change her into a Guardia.
Notes: Enter the “ambivelent Guardia” The girl with the iron horn crown.
If Tamarin (the girl from the begining of the chapter) was the happy Guardia, and Hyunewurl is the “unhappy soon-to-be guardia” that just leaves this one prespective to be introduced. This and last page were off script, and not something Edited by Jason but I felt this page needed to be in here before showing what happens beyond that.
Guardias look normally like a larger version of who they used to be as a human. Its hard for non humans to pick out who a guardia is and who isnt, unless they transform.
Notes: This girl cant escape.
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