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Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by WideSpreadPanic

WideSpreadPanic — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 06:49:18 +0000

Awww, but the action was just starting… *pouts* You do very nice work, though ;3

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Aesti

Aesti — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 09:05:47 +0000

Off topic response, sorry.
Ratty please check your email cause I goofed up. You should be getting a new email in a few minutes.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Schmedderling

Schmedderling — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 02:48:28 +0000

So I just realised that I lost those extra pages when my gmail broke (or whatever it did, now it just freezes my computer). Could you please either send them to my deviantart or the other email I gave you? Sorry to be such a pain. >_>;

And with midterms over I should be able to get that gift done soon… :3

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Aragem

Aragem — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 23:49:43 +0000

Man oh man, now that is a sight to wake up to. Poor girls.

And I understand what you say about the character design having seemingly closed eyes. There are a lot of anime characters that are like that.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by NekoHitori

NekoHitori — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 23:48:55 +0000

I, too, am interested in these extra pages. Also, are we still able to buy the book, or were all the copies sold?

I was wondering about the eyes thing. When I first saw this page, I just thought it was the picture, like how some people draw eyes and eyebrows through hair. And then Jaylaw brought up the “no eyes” thing, and there was confusion, and so thank you for clearing that up.

So is Rendivi walking around in her Guardia form or her machine form? Because it looks like she’s somewhere in between…

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Edenworld Saga

Edenworld Saga — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 07:02:25 +0000

Jaylaw: Actually, Tamarin is a full guardia, but she has these very squinty eyes like brock from pokemon: http://pokemon-fantasy.tripod.com/brock.jpg She can still see just fine. But at some point, She did loose her sight for a day or 2 when she was first infected with nanomachines. Really, Tamarin is an example of a guardia whos happy about her situation. In this chapter you meet 2 guardias, a happy one, an indiffrent one, and the 2 human girls who are very unhappy. Its sort of to explain that everyone has a diffrent opinion about what the mashina are doing.

schmedder: ^ also see abouve: when they become proto-guardia (as you say) they loose consciousness untill they stop growing. But the nanomachines in their bodys are just pillars to support a larger version of their origional size. because the nanomachines that are used are stripped of their base codes, they dont possess any latent attackers or machine DNA that would kill the humans outright. If a male puts his raw nanomachines into a human or proto-guardia, then she goes through real apotheosis and becomes a robot from the inside out. they only thing that remains the same is the personality and the outter form( mostly). fat guardias or really stalky guardias, transform into heavyer armored robots, thin guardias and tall guardias can turn into lithe and fast machines.

Tamarin can see, she just has squinty eyes.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Schmedderling

Schmedderling — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 21:19:04 +0000

So do they temporarily lose their eyes when they’re becoming proto-Guardia? Or is it only when they have a Mashina’s DNA? I’m a bit confused about the difference between the proto-Guardia and Guardia. The proto-Guardia have mashina nanites minus the DNA added, which makes them larger, but then are they still organic or are they metal?

Also, would they become Guardia that would look exactly the same as when they were human? Or would their body type change (like if they were heavier would they lose weight/ if they were skinny would they gain weight). Is there a general Guardia body plan that they all conform to slightly?

I’m also wondering how Tami’s finding her way around without eyes.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by LoneGenesis

LoneGenesis — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 20:37:01 +0000

With each page I look at I can only marvel at your shading skills.

Aw poor Sky shot down before the action began. What I enjoy much about your story line is the fact that no Guardia will ever be alone. She’ll eventually find her match.

As with Jirune above, I heard about these mysterious ‘extra pages’ and have been dying to get a look at them.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by Jirune

Jirune — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 18:35:16 +0000

Hm… characters I’ve never heard of, doin’ the bump n’ grind… interesting.
I really do love your concept on human/machine transition. Unrelatedly, I’ve found that nanomachines are science’s magic!

I, too, am interested in these “extra pages” you speak of… I believe we all have an email attached to our Wordpress login? I don’t remeber exactly. I’ll go fiddle with it to make sure.

Comment on Mashina’s Guardia – Page 2 by sandraman

sandraman — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 17:54:20 +0000

Hell jeah! i’d like to see it very much.
And i only asked the name because I wanted to ensure that it is a NAME, not a word what I do not know.

thats what you get when your firs language is not English.