This page was kind of a pain in the ass to tone, so forgive me if you need 20/20 vision to see all the details.
undettered, Lyron grabs Jet and drags him by the wings through an adjacent wall before he throws him off the roof. Jet unphased, shoots lyron.
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Edenworld – Page 44
March 4th, 2009
That’s one building gone…
PS: Jet’s got mad skillz to shoot on his back in the air!!
I think it’s safe to say that both of them are right pissed by now.
Robots: 1 Buildings:0
I’d hate to be that mouse….I don’t think insurance covers damage by giant robots
hello RNH, where did you come from?
Signed up day before yesterday and decided to sneak in when no one was looking. ;P
Love your comic. The story is interesting and the art is awesome.
And I didn’t notice it until now, but Jet needs to stop wearing that cloak. He’s got quite the sexy body. :3
I started to say.. “In the first five panels I couldn’t figure out what was going on”.. and then I read the description. I assumed that this was what happened, but good to have it confirmed.
Maybe if you had shown only Lyrons arm.hand only dragging jet’s head through a wall, instead of showing his full body, and then in the next panel had Lyron flinging him (just like you showed) and then went on to have jet firing while in the air.. maybe that would have worked out better?
Anyways, glad to see another page up! Living the dream, producing your own comic. Awesome! hope to keep seeing more work from you.