* Lyron, not happy with being shot, lunges off the building and lands on top of Jet the White. “A head-shot not enough?” It seems Jet might have to try again with this enemy (Lyron on the other hand is holding back his standard weapons).
* page 29 has been edited to include a more correct version of Jet’s eye (especially since the original file was botched a little) : http://www.edenworldsaga.com/webcomic/edenworld/889
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They’re not red, they’re darkish pink.
And I got what was happening quite easily once I realised we’re all looking up Lyron’s skirt. xD
I noticed that you follow robot webcomics, what webcomics are you following right now?
Okay, about the chick-Rendevi?-on page 29… How do I say this without sounding evil?
Hmm…
Her outfit around her upper abdominal area seems somewhat akward and in need of a shirt or under armor of some sort, yes?
There, *much* better than the original thought…
And in other news…
Oh no’s, Jet! Don’t kill him with your skirt shot, Lyron! (:O
LOL Kureo: She’s naked, just like the men are. In fact all Guardia are nude.
Please ‘Edenworld Saga’ don’t listen to Kurieo.. on your humanoid mechs/biomechs needing cloths.
I am perfectly fine with her appearance. *wink wink* matter of fact, I would suggest bigger bust. XD
Anyways, this page was pretty clear on what was going on, good job on that..
44.6 tons landing on you.. even if you were another mech, that’s bound to hurt quite a bit..
Kureo: I imagine I’ll get to have a philosophical conversation about this later when the rating of the comic goes up. As a female creator I find it silly that people in general automatically associate nudity with sexuality. To try and guard against people thinking the nudity represents porn, I endeavored not to detail anything like nipples or crotch.
To give you some insight into the psyche of the Mashina, they share a very Greek view of the body as something to be respected and celebrated (unlike the Judeo-Christian idea that nudity is shameful). Because the men don’t wear clothes, they discourage the women from doing it also. So in Edenworld, being naked is normal enough that there’s no big significance placed on it.
But hey – they are big mecha elemental people and they don’t have to give a crap about what the other two races think about them.
Well, the only mecha comics that I read are yours, the two that Pilot/Stripedwine’s responsible for, and Comics in Disguise. I’ve been hoping to pick up another couple though, I want more robots. xD
Ah, I see. Yeah, just a passing thought, so I can’t & won’t flame cultures. *bows in respect to the giant robot that squishes her flat about whinning about fashions*
*Looks one more time at the Lyron stomp image* I can’t resist; Kowabunga-island drum music!
Sorry, something about the hips… XD
In other news; I love your comics and their style. You certainly draw machines better than I ever will. :3
Ack! Plot spoilers! D8 *slaps a hand over Edenworld Saga’s mouth*
oops! good point. (deletes)