You may have drawn this page up for dramatics.. and I don’t honestly know how you do things.. like (Do you try to add in any surrealism) ((I think that’s the word)
Anyways, like with Lyron getting shot in the head.. I can more see that knocking him on his ass.. like or just knocking him off his feet, considering how powerful the weapon blast is.
Rather than him getting shot in the head, and .. going flying backwards like he did. (a body shot I could see him go flying backwards like that)
Of course you may have an explanation as the artist.. why he reacted this way I have no clue.. but I was just sitting here staring at it and that came to mind.
Surrealism? There’s surrealism everywhere especially when Hresvalgr astrally projects Lyron back to the world tree realm.
Core: Lyron took a mortal blow in the same spot he was shot the first time and while he was staggered (stumbling back) Jet sprang up and roundhouse kicked him hard core. There is probably a 6 second delay of real time between each panel, and while *yes* some scenes are overly dramatized for hilarity, Prediction of flow through thumbnailing the page isn’t an exact science. your only going to get the ‘frame by frame’ definitive with a full-on storyboard, but hey! It could be worse – have you ever seen the fight pages for the Jo-Jo’s bizarre adventure manga? Talk about confusion!
Lyron is sparkling and healing? Probably something to do with Hresvalgr, since I doubt a jotun’s nanites would normally work that fast…
I supose this will either freak out or extremely confuse Jet.
schmedder; Man it’s scary how dead on you are! LOL.
Notes: Jotun and Mashina can heal within minutes if they blow through their nanotech reserves all at once. This is obviously unwise though, because Mashina can’t replace these nanotech reserves unless they strip it from ground or a Guardia– which takes time.
Ah. So they’d have to strip the material to make the nanites from the ground or the existing nanites from a Guardia?
Oh, and I know the human immune system is specific to a person’s body, would nanites be specific to a Mashina?
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Am I seeing what I think I’m seeing? Lyron’s healing!?!?!?
PS:That’s 3 building going hasta-la-byebye!
Well it’s either his nanobots at work or his bishonen is showing!
I hope lyron kicks his butt
“with any luck, I can wrap this book up in under 4 pages.”
Well, just don’t rush it.. I mean if it requires 5 pages.. go with five.
Anyways.. did.. mech with the gun.. like.. do a *Swoosh* kinda movement.. Like really fast in the 3rd panel?
Also curious to know whats going on with Lyron.. look forward to the next page.
You may have drawn this page up for dramatics.. and I don’t honestly know how you do things.. like (Do you try to add in any surrealism) ((I think that’s the word)
Anyways, like with Lyron getting shot in the head.. I can more see that knocking him on his ass.. like or just knocking him off his feet, considering how powerful the weapon blast is.
Rather than him getting shot in the head, and .. going flying backwards like he did. (a body shot I could see him go flying backwards like that)
Of course you may have an explanation as the artist.. why he reacted this way I have no clue.. but I was just sitting here staring at it and that came to mind.
Surrealism? There’s surrealism everywhere especially when Hresvalgr astrally projects Lyron back to the world tree realm.
Core: Lyron took a mortal blow in the same spot he was shot the first time and while he was staggered (stumbling back) Jet sprang up and roundhouse kicked him hard core. There is probably a 6 second delay of real time between each panel, and while *yes* some scenes are overly dramatized for hilarity, Prediction of flow through thumbnailing the page isn’t an exact science. your only going to get the ‘frame by frame’ definitive with a full-on storyboard, but hey! It could be worse – have you ever seen the fight pages for the Jo-Jo’s bizarre adventure manga? Talk about confusion!
Robots: 3 Buildings: 0
Lyron is sparkling and healing? Probably something to do with Hresvalgr, since I doubt a jotun’s nanites would normally work that fast…
I supose this will either freak out or extremely confuse Jet.
schmedder; Man it’s scary how dead on you are! LOL.
Notes: Jotun and Mashina can heal within minutes if they blow through their nanotech reserves all at once. This is obviously unwise though, because Mashina can’t replace these nanotech reserves unless they strip it from ground or a Guardia– which takes time.
Yay? I’m scarily correct? xD
Ah. So they’d have to strip the material to make the nanites from the ground or the existing nanites from a Guardia?
Oh, and I know the human immune system is specific to a person’s body, would nanites be specific to a Mashina?
@Edenworld Saga
“have you ever seen the fight pages for the Jo-Jo’s bizarre adventure manga?”
Yes I have.
And I agree, it’s hectic.