Comments on: Mashina’s Guardia – Page 14

By: giri

giri — Mon, 26 Jul 2010 01:45:18 +0000

This is just another side of their society right? It’s tastefully done regardless. Though you peeked my interest with that “next page” comment… O.o …Oh, and for the record: *glomps Chris* XP great art as always!

By: Vermifuge

Vermifuge — Sun, 25 Jul 2010 03:20:30 +0000

Not to hijack the thread but I wanted to point out the new art site for Ms. Crontiris. Art of Chris It's still a work in progress so this is just a sneak peak. I raided her computer and found a lot of images and early character design from Edenworld Saga and other projects. She will probably kill me for posting must of it but she doesn't have the login and password yet. So check them out while you can. I'll be adding more art as fast as I can.

By: Jaylaw

Jaylaw — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:36:10 +0000

Lemme try again! I do know this bit! Well, the first bit! ^-^
Assuming you mean a regular human female, it’s pretty certain that she would die. Mech fluids, the nanomachines in the fluid; they would attack her systems (that’s what makes the fluids toxic). It’s what happens in most cases when any organic comes into contact with active fluids.
If the human’s aphel was a match for the mech in question, she would survive longer (she would turn into a Guardia-proper). However, if the Machina responsible for her conversion had never met her, and didn’t meet her, she would die from being one half of a unmated pair. He, of course, would continue blindly on with his life, oblivious. Unless he got some sort of mental signal that alerted him…
How’d I do?

By: Schmedderling

Schmedderling — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 15:32:31 +0000

I think if Ryan had been reading the comments from up until now they would have figured out that it’s a plot point, not fanservice. There are plenty of other sites for that. And for the record, I think Ratbat is doing this tastefully. There’s a difference between drawing sex and drawing porn.

But I also have a couple questions about the whole Gaurdia thing. Does this mean that a Gaurdia can be changed via any orifice? Or by the accidental way it happened between Lance and Cheska (shrapnel covered in mecha “blood)? So if a human female were to prick herself on a peice of shrapnel she would change, it could happen as casually as that? And if the change occured without the mech knowing, what would happen?
And you mentioned that when the Mashina and Gaurdia have children she goes into a type of stasis. How long does that last, and does the mech have to maintain “physical contact” while she’s comatose?

By: Kimbot1984

Kimbot1984 — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 13:41:15 +0000

As mentioned before Ryan, it has been hinted at plenty of times – in fact Cheska and the growing relationship of Lyron and Panchun was a glimps of this. There was something between these women and the males that the mecha from Lyron’s world didn’t realise. A special link that was accidently discovered by Cheska and her mate. Didn’t you ask yourself WHY Cheska was so bloomin’ massive? Why the population of Lyron’s mecha pals is so darn small and they are growing weaker and weaker? Well here’s your answer. Therefore this has been part of the story from the begining. Lyron hasn’t a clue about all this either, in a way he’s in the same position as the readers of this comic. He’ll probably also feel terrible. All this time he thought he and Panchun couldn’t be together because he thought they were incompatible as a species – but it turns out this isn’t the case. We’ve found this out before he has so now we are in a position to think about what hasn’t happened in the comic so far and make connections ourselves. How is Lyron going to cope with this? Is this one of the things the messenger god wanted Lyron to learn? Will this make him miss Panchun even more now?! These thoughts a pretty darn massive hook if you ask me. It isn’t just about sex, it’s about the emotions behind it, and that doesn’t make it sloppy fanservice to me.

By: redcoatcat

redcoatcat — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 03:48:55 +0000

Such utter fan service, you know it’s not like mythology has similar concepts to what is being presented.. Oh wait it does!
I guess most of the Greek mythology is just poor storytelling and crude fanservice.

By: RnH

RnH — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 02:22:28 +0000

I wonder what could be worse than a mech raping a girl, *sticks around to find out*.
As far as this page is concerned ES, I think you did a damn good job in depicting this scene without being overly graphic (even though last page had roboc*ck, but he hadn’t done anything with it yet), since the only thing I see here is you showing a sample of the uglier side of the mechs at Edenworld.
If some peeps can’t take it, it’s their loss. Not sure why anyone would be too put off though, since there’s worse depictions of similar situations in other comics as well as T.V., Movies, ect.

Just my two cents…

Keep up the good work!

By: Jaylaw

Jaylaw — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 22:59:57 +0000

Well, I only said ‘I think’ with regard to Ren and Jet… But now I’ve learnt something. ^-^
I won’t ask what late night whims Rendivi might have, but I’ll assume it’s a bedtime story.

*agrees with NekoHitori*
*grins at MopZ*
*waves bye-bye to Ryan*
*hugs Ratbat*
*waits for next page!*

By: NekoHitori

NekoHitori — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 22:17:05 +0000

I thought these past few pages have been tastefully done, even if I was rooting for the girl to get away. We had an idea of what was going to happen, and we can see what’s going on without the artwork becoming overly explicit.

Moving on, if the horned Guardia is that nonchalant about everything else as she is about this, I’d imagine that her mate practically trips over himself trying to please her and get a reaction more enthusiastic than “meh.” Poor guy…

By: Edenworld Saga

Edenworld Saga — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 21:15:15 +0000

Ryanthusaur: Welp, atleast you picked a good time to leave. The next page was going to be slightly worse then the last 2 however, This is just a tiny slice of the last 400 pages and you do a disservice to judge the whole story based on whats happening now. I “expected” a few people would be unhappy with this concept even though im trying to keep it as tastefull as possible. Good luck in your endeavors then.