Sniped ya’ll anouther page. ;p

Notes: The “gate” that Höly is reffering to will be explained in detail later. But basicly, their is no formal gate to Edenworld. Instead the land is littered with “Thermopylae” (Hot gates) basicly concrete or metal obelisks with Sigils radiating magic, courtesy of the paragon government. The sigils are a ward against unauthorized peoples and tend to microwave the wicked… the Last panel is a faint glimpse of the ‘gate effect” whitch is like a jagged ripple of water when you step through its aura for the first time. If your a bad person, the aura cooks you.

* If your wondering about panel 7 and your a SRW fan, the mashina on the left is infact an EWS interpretation of Thrudgelmir. However, In this story he is sentient and goes by the name of “Sledge”. The other 2 mecha I made up, but this is the part of the story that is homage related. Theres a chance of seeing a mecha you know of resurected as a ‘creature” extra in the background.

* I’ll be eliminating lance and Cheska from the side charecter list shortly as they never reoccur in the story past the 1st story arc. Haveing too manny charecters in the Bio section tends to confuse and daunt readers i think.

* wants to live in a world full of cool mashine people.