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Notes: one thing I forgot to mention in the old script changes was that the baboon devil originally escaped by doing a back flip and diving into the sand. He was slightly spooked by Jet’s scars (Mark of Greed). In this version however, baboon guy feigns death, and since Jet doesn’t have the proper equipment to tell when a devil is alive or dead, he just moves on to prevent his colliege’s from blasting Lyron.
Good to see that Lyron’s back to normal, he was downright creepy the last couple of pages!
Poor Gino, he thought he lost the kid, but it just turns out Lyron’s been carrying it around in his manskirt.
I’m not always sure who’s talking here, is that Gino speaking in the third panel? And to be honest I don’t know what to put for your poll. There isn’t an “all of the above” option. xD
I second that “All of the Above” option. I can’t decide between those individually, but if I could make my own option that wouldn’t have it be a huge tonne of work, I’d go with “Romance” being more or less a combo of options 2 and 4. I’m a total sucker for it, not to say I don’t like guns and asplodey things some times.
Jirune, If i gave an option “all of the abouve” then eeryone would choose it. I wouldnt get accurate data X3
@Edenworld Saga
I didn’t vote because none of the options really fit for me personally..I’d like to see more sexy moments.. but I think I might be biased since I am male and like hentai….
I read a lot of manga from Jump.. er, whats it called in japan.. Shonen? Hmm… You know the manga series called Zetman?
I like it because, it has a mix of humor, action, and pervertedness..and it doesn’t censor itself, but all of this stuff, its all in context.. it makes sense. So whatever you add, it needs to make sense for the given situation… to a degree.
I like mangas that inspire, and where you see the characters grow.. that’s my thing.
I figured I would just say this… since I did not vote.
I’d say your best bet is just to continue doing what your doing, and attract like minded people. Of course… I guess you can check statistics… and if not a lot of people is viewing your comic..then you may want to change your game plan a little…
To elaborate on those last two sentences in the above post..
I don’t know what your gameplan is… what you want to do with your graphic novel.. that right there is key, to what action your going to take…are you going to one day sale it in book form? Do you want it to become more popular? Or do you want a hardcore audience that follows you late into your career?
That’s gonna be one special baby, I can tell.
Lemme guess: Later in this series or in another series, the baby is gonna come back into play, right?