The Newcomer – Page 50
The Newcomer – Page 50

*Work in progress*

Baboon devil survives and the mashina leave the scene. End of Chapter.

I also Just want to add, that the last 6 pages were NOT written with help from the editor Jason Lanum. If the text seems grammatically bad or disjointed then that’s my fault, I’m totally dyslexic.

Notes: I might add, There were several changes made during the drawing of this fight scene. In the original Script, The baboon Devil had showed up as a summon from a much nastier Devil Lady named Wagyu Cadmere (who shows up later). She was the one who casted the ocean water spell but teleports out of there shortly after. Baboon Guy was supposed to be much bigger then the other mashina, and Eyeball Monster was supposed to be much smaller. I switched their sizes around because I had thought the baboon was more important and shouldn’t really spam the size difference for the enemies all the time. In Edenworld, the only creatures bigger then the mechas  are the dragons really, and to have a bunch of enemies show up who were as big as dragons would cheapen out the fear factor. The old script was much more melancholy too, Geno did not handle the death of the female humans so well (because he himself wants to have a wife someday) and this all fits in abit more in the next book.

I don’t see how some comics can tell a story in less then 30 pages. (Ok maybe I can sorta see it) but Even keeping full page splashes to a sheer minimum, I find I still need about 5 pages per scene to really illustrate things out.

Look forward to alot more plot and characterization in book 8, as the truly “weird” stuff with the human x robot relationships happens now. (I know thats why some of you are still here afterall.)


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  1. Kevin says:

    Wow! Very cool man! Just got a chance to read your latest ones from the last 4-5 months and they were so sweet! Hopefully in time though the fight scenes will be shaded cause some of them are confusing :3 But they look good!
    I have to make sure to keep some more tab space at the top of my pile for this comic ; D

  2. Core says:

    Are you referring to American comics when you say 30 pages? I know I have been reading Naruto.. Bleach and one piece… and only 16 pages per release, or there about, drives me up the wall. You don’t see any story happening… Its BS. I honestly hate it.. well love hate relationship.

    Berserk does the same damn thing basically.. I loath that artist..

  3. Kevin: hey thanks for writing me! I was away at a convention over the last week and and a lousy correspondant (forgive me) How did you find this comic? How did you get into robots? Do you draw too? Id love to hear from you. Its flattering to know im on your bookmark list too. Keep checking back!

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