June 14th, 2008
World Tree - Page 45
If any of you were confused about what happened in the last 2 pages, Lyron just teleported to Panchun’s position in a flash of light after he popped her sister Genya one in the face.
.. some things aren’t easy to portray in comic format. It would be a lot clearer if this was animated…
August 9th, 2008 at 10:27 am
Well, you explained it to us, so it all works out. Maybe more exaggerated lines or something would have helped? When he did the teleportation.
Anyways, really enjoying the comic.
August 10th, 2008 at 11:11 am
Hmmm, maybe if the white glow around Lyron was made larger too. It looks kinda like he’s glowing, but if you could make it more exagerated and obvious it might be easier to tell that something magical is going on. You tend to do white outlines around characters anyways, so it looks like it just might be that.
I agree that the white lines would be better if they were exagerated. It might help if you had some of Lyron looking blurred, or if all of him isn’t appearing at once and he’s sorta this stream of stuff. Kinda like parts of him are still falling into place from the teleportation.
Panchun’s umbrella also seems to disapear in that last panel.