Comments on: World Tree - Page 45 http://www.edenworldsaga.com/webcomic/worldtree/482 Art: Chris Crontiris - Editor: Jason Lanum Wed, 07 Jan 2009 18:37:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Schmedderling http://www.edenworldsaga.com/webcomic/worldtree/482#comment-84 Schmedderling Sun, 10 Aug 2008 18:11:33 +0000 http://www.edenworldsaga.com/?p=482#comment-84 Hmmm, maybe if the white glow around Lyron was made larger too. It looks kinda like he's glowing, but if you could make it more exagerated and obvious it might be easier to tell that something magical is going on. You tend to do white outlines around characters anyways, so it looks like it just might be that. I agree that the white lines would be better if they were exagerated. It might help if you had some of Lyron looking blurred, or if all of him isn't appearing at once and he's sorta this stream of stuff. Kinda like parts of him are still falling into place from the teleportation. Panchun's umbrella also seems to disapear in that last panel. Hmmm, maybe if the white glow around Lyron was made larger too. It looks kinda like he’s glowing, but if you could make it more exagerated and obvious it might be easier to tell that something magical is going on. You tend to do white outlines around characters anyways, so it looks like it just might be that.

I agree that the white lines would be better if they were exagerated. It might help if you had some of Lyron looking blurred, or if all of him isn’t appearing at once and he’s sorta this stream of stuff. Kinda like parts of him are still falling into place from the teleportation.

Panchun’s umbrella also seems to disapear in that last panel.

]]> By: Core http://www.edenworldsaga.com/webcomic/worldtree/482#comment-83 Core Sat, 09 Aug 2008 17:27:30 +0000 http://www.edenworldsaga.com/?p=482#comment-83 Well, you explained it to us, so it all works out. Maybe more exaggerated lines or something would have helped? When he did the teleportation. Anyways, really enjoying the comic. Well, you explained it to us, so it all works out. Maybe more exaggerated lines or something would have helped? When he did the teleportation.

Anyways, really enjoying the comic.

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